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Pitch deck review

Does your pitch deck actually land?

Send your deck and a short brief. Get back an experienced operator's written review: what works, what doesn't, and what to fix first.

Review My Pitch

Founding price £129 · 5 working days · up to 20 slides

Tell me about the project and what you want from the review.

ProjectB2B marketplace for industrial spare parts
Who will see itUK seed funds · raising £1.5M
What I want from the reviewIs the story clear before the numbers?
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Overall and story commentsDoes the story hold together for this audience, and where does it lose them?
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Slide-by-slide commentsContent, logic, numbers and wording on every slide.
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Visual commentsLayout, readability and what to cut, so each slide makes one point.

Who reviews your deck?

Tolga Gemicioglu, PhD

  • Extensive experience in strategy, product and commercial leadership, including 10 years at eBay across three countries
  • Former CFO and CMO at Moldcell, combining financial and commercial expertise
  • Founder and co-founder of multiple businesses, with fundraising and pitching experience
  • Startup board advisor, investor, and accredited mentor at The Portfolio Collective
  • PhD in Organization & Management; MSc in Finance from Boston College

I've been on both sides of the table: building businesses, pitching ideas, and evaluating opportunities as an advisor and investor. I know what makes a business case compelling, where assumptions fall apart, and what questions investors are likely to ask.

I personally read every deck and write every review.

LinkedIn profile · London

What you get

A written review you can act on the same day

  • Overall and story commentsAn honest verdict on whether your story lands with the audience you're pitching to.
  • Slide-by-slide commentsContent, logic, order, numbers and wording, slide by slide.
  • Visual commentsPractical layout and readability fixes. You keep control of your design.
  • Suggested rewritesAlternative wording or structure for the slides that matter most.
  • Your top 5 fixesA prioritised list, so you know where to start.

What founders say

From founders whose decks I've reviewed

The end result was that we won the AI Forge pitching competition and were placed in front of several investors.

Jag SinghFounder, Keywise
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Tolga is professional and experienced. He has a good eye for detail and was able to quickly understand our offering. When looking at fundraising, Tolga spent a lot of time reviewing our decks and looking at ways that we could improve our messaging, either by providing illustrative images or punchier text, with a focus on telling a coherent story. The end result was that we won the AI Forge pitching competition and were placed in front of several investors, and we have Tolga to thank for that. I would be happy to work with him if the opportunity arose again.

Tolga has a real ability to look at an investor deck from the perspective of the person actually being asked to invest.

Shane ParmarFounder, ONDA+®
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Tolga has a real ability to look at an investor deck from the perspective of the person actually being asked to invest. His feedback is direct, commercially grounded and focused on the questions that matter: what is the opportunity, where is the evidence, what is missing, and what would make the story more compelling to an investor. His input has helped me challenge assumptions, sharpen the way we communicate ONDA+® and think much more critically about what investors will need to see as we prepare to raise.

He found logical gaps in our story and helped it flow more easily. His suggestions were actionable, not vague.

Cagri KarahanFounder, Richify
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Tolga’s review went beyond slide feedback. He found logical gaps in our story and helped it flow more easily, challenged how we positioned the B2B and consumer sides of Richify, and flagged the questions investors would ask. His suggestions were actionable, not vague. Very useful before investor conversations.

He knows how to challenge the bigger picture while also paying close attention to the details that make a pitch convincing.

Yerim KimCo-founder, Arete Career
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Tolga has been incredibly supportive throughout the journey of building Arete Career. From the early stages of shaping our business, he has consistently taken the time to understand what we are trying to achieve and provided thoughtful, detailed, and practical advice tailored to our specific challenges.

What makes his feedback particularly valuable is his ability to see a business from multiple perspectives. Drawing on his experience as an investor, entrepreneur, and corporate professional, he knows how to challenge the bigger picture while also paying close attention to the details that make a pitch convincing.

His guidance has helped us refine not only how we communicate our business to potential investors, but also how we think about our strategy and long-term growth.

Fundraising is ultimately about more than having a polished deck. It’s about being able to communicate a compelling business opportunity, backed by clear reasoning and evidence. Tolga understands this exceptionally well.

Having experienced firsthand the depth of his commitment and the value of his advice, I have every confidence that the same expertise and dedication will help many other founders strengthen their businesses and tell their stories more effectively.

Who it's for

Decks that need to persuade a specific audience

Founders raising

Investor decks, Demo Days and accelerator applications, from pre-seed to Series A.

Commercial pitches

Decks for clients, partners, enterprise buyers and marketplaces, where the deck has to win a deal.

Corporate pitches

Internal proposals and new initiatives that need sign-off from a board or leadership team.

How it works

From brief to review in four steps

  1. Send your brief and deck

    Tell me about the project, who you're pitching to and what you want from the review. Upload the deck or share a link.

  2. Add two short videos

    Optional

    Up to 5 minutes each: one explaining the project in your own words, one of you presenting the deck as you would to your audience. They help me judge the story as your audience will hear it.

  3. Pay securely

    Card payment through Stripe. Add a walk-through call or a re-review on the form if you want them.

  4. Get your review

    A PDF in your inbox within 5 working days.

Founding price

£129

For the first 20 reviews, then £179

Prices in GBP. International customers can pay in their local currency at checkout.

  • Up to 20 slides
  • Up to two 5-minute videos considered
  • Written review within 5 working days
  • Revise-or-refund promise
Review My Pitch
Optional extrasPrice
30-minute call to walk through your review£70
Re-review of your revised deck, within 30 days£70
Extra slides above 20£50 per 10£100 at most

Adding extras: tick them on the form. You can also add a re-review later, from the link in your review email or the re-review page. Extra slides are counted and ticked automatically when you upload your deck.

For comparison, comparable expert-led reviews in the UK cost around £250–£450.

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Confidentiality, AI and our promise

Confidential

Confidentiality is built into our terms, so there's no separate NDA to sign. Your deck and videos are used only for your review and deleted 90 days after delivery.

Reviewed by Tolga

I review every deck myself, and the judgement and the comments are mine.

Revise or refund

If the review misses the mark, tell me what didn't help within 7 days. I'll revise it at no cost. If it still doesn't help, I'll refund the review fee in full. One per customer.

Questions

Before you send it

Do you redesign my slides?

No. I comment on content, story and visuals, and suggest rewrites for key slides. You keep control of your deck and your design.

Can you guarantee I'll raise money?

No one honestly can. The review helps you make your strongest case to the audience you're pitching.

Which formats do you accept?

PDF is best. PowerPoint and Keynote exports are fine, or share a link from Google Drive or Canva.

Why send videos?

A 5-minute brief tells me what you're trying to achieve, and a 5-minute run-through shows how the story sounds when you present it. Both make the review sharper. They're optional, and two short videos are plenty.

How do I add a call or a re-review?

Tick either one on the form when you send your brief. You can also add a re-review later, within 30 days of delivery, from the link in your review email or the re-review page. You only send the revised deck and a short note on what you changed, and you get written comments within 3 working days. One re-review covers one revised version of the same deck. After paying for a call, you'll get a link to book a time.

How do you use AI?

AI tools help me speed up first-pass analysis and drafting, like any other tool. I read every deck myself, and the judgement and the comments in your review are mine. I use AI tools with model training switched off, so they don't learn from your files, and I delete your chats once the review is delivered.

Is this investment or legal advice?

No. It's an experienced operator's view of your pitch, not investment, legal or financial advice.

Start your review

Tell me about your pitch

A good brief makes a better review. After you send it, you'll go straight to secure payment.

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Short videos (optional, up to 5 minutes each)
The project in your words
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Up to 20 slides are included. Upload your deck and the slide count appears here.